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PostPosted: 21 Jul 2008, 15:36 
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No, I have it done so I'll just post it up. It's easy. ;) It's just 10: 36, no harm.
Title of Chapter: Lisa's Appartment
Rated: T - language, of course.
Summary of Chappie: The man from Avoca Aveune was holding up his mail up, looking at Danny and Jazz. "I knew her..." his voice was soft, but Danny could still hear it.
Genre: Drama/Friendship

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There was a man from Avoca Aveune. Danny always saw him. He knew most things and Danny and Jazz had known him before they moved over to another part of Amity Park. Jazz hugged her notebook close, "so you're saying that Tucker's really evil and he put her under some haywire of a spell that took away the gothic part of her--the part she's more proud of...?"

"Exactly, 'he looked at her.

"Okay, have you been eating Tuck's Vocidin? Because you are insane. I swear you are." Jazz had been serious. "Until now, I asked my doctors if they ever saw anyone named Leona Lisa Cuddy but they told me that they know that she is beyond insane."

"She is?"

"She writes comics for her pleasure." Danny said, holding up a brown file, "they have to mean something. I know that. Leona seems like an adventurous type of person." The man from Avoca Aveune had heard them.

"You looking for me?" he asked.

Danny and Jazz both nodded their heads, slowly. The man nodded his heads, jestering them to come inside his house. They followed him, flopping down on the couch before looking at the man suspiciously.

"You lived here for a long time?" Jazz asked.

"Yes, yes, a long, long time..." the man replied, flopping down on a chair himself, holding a cup of tea in his hands, he drank silently. "Jasmine and Daniel Fenton, I haven't seen you for a while. You both came in here for a reason."

"We'd like to know about... Leona Lisa Cuddy?" Danny asked as Jazz held her pen and opened her notebook. "She's important to us because we need to solve a puzzle."

"Oh I see..." the man started. "Everyone called her Lisa. She hated the name Leona. She was appealing. So beautiful. When she grew up, her beauty increased more and more---"

"I can see why Tucker's interested in her." Danny mumbled over to his sister who giggled under her breath, jolting down the information as the man said it.

"That's all I actually know about her. Her physical state and what everyone else called her. You have her brown folder, right? Found it out in the school she first was in. Here's her address, everything is there... oh and read some of her comics, it'll help you understand her more."

"She writes about her life in her comics?" Jazz asked.

"I guess so." Danny replied, taking the paper from the man. "We'll go to Lisa's apartment soon. First, I just wanna kniow what's up with her comics..."

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sounds interesting...

whats next? =P

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i'll write that down.

shes really important because...? why?

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*shrugs*

anyway okay then

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Title of Chap: Comic Adventure
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Summary of Chappie: Danny looked through her comics... "This is all about some twisted dude named Robert. Who is he supposed to be? What is he supposed to do in her life?"
Genre; Drama/Friendship

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Comics were all fictional.

But somewhere around, there'd be a hint of a person's life.

But Leona Lisa Cuddy was different; she had written ficlets and pictures of a boy named Robert. Robert was throwing himself into something--fire? Ice? A hole? The last one was something that seemed a bit more possible than any other of them. But he realised that it was water and when Robert dived in water, it sent Danny a single that he was a diver and it seemed to be that Leona was shorter and possibly younger than Robert will ever be. He seemed maturer. Two years to be exact.

Danny sighed. "This is all about a twisted dude named Robert. Who is he? What is he supposed to do in her life?"

He stopped when he realized that there were a few lines udner each and every one. Like a Journal written on comics. Danny brought his eyes close and silently read the page.

Robert was a fourteen year old diver. He played on my team and I was twleve years old. "Are you sure you're okay, Lisa?" He whispered gently into my ear, and I shivered and shook. The pain in my neck was unbareable. I couldn't realize that this would stay in my neck like that. I nodded my head then simply opened up my robe to reveal my swim suit.

I ran out to the board and I felt nauseaous... I jumped anyways, backwards and did a perfect jump.... but the pain in my neck only increased and when I was down on the ground, I forced myself up and everyone was watching me. "What?" I asked.

Robert pulled me up, "Lisa, you have a rash on the left side of your face."


"Then why did the idiot make the jump?" Danny asked, flipping it to another page. A hospital scenery where the doctor seemed to be pushing a syringe through the girl's back. He could finally make out the eye color she used--emerald. Her hair was a messy brown and her skin was milky white. "I'd give her two dates and a milkshake."

"I'm sorry your treatment had to be so public, the hospital's booked with patients." He pushed the syring in.

"I usually dive while people are looking at my butt." She responded, "d*mn it. This will bring the hell of me."


"At least she knows how to curse. And she's a bit of a humor gal, huh?" Danny told himself, flipping to another page. "This is exciting and best part of it all---it's free." He tmumbled to himself, looking at the colorful page. The scene seemed to be of her and her... mother? Sister? It looked more possible to be her mother but Danny can hardly make out.

"Lisa, you're sick."

"I'm fine, mother."

"You can't say that."

'So I might be bleeding out of my mouth and I might have this huge rash. I might've had neck pain for a few weeks but all in all, I'm doing fine."

"Leona!"

"Get out, mom!"


"Okay... I resign that.... I'll give her two dates and two milkshakes. One for each, 'Danny flipped the page. "Until now: she's hot. She twleve in this comic. She kinda talks to her parents rudely and she's in the hospital because she's bleeding, has a huge rash and neck pain. What else?" He flipped to the next page and hhe was surprised no one bothered him for a while.

Next senery seemed to be the doctor looking serious-like at Leona. He wondered... what happened now?

"You're pregnant."

"I'm twelve."

"You still had a few glasses of beers with your guy friends and then--you wake up in some party and you don't even remember dressing up?"

"Don't you dare tell my parents."

"I won't but maybe you should."

"I want an abortion."

"Okay, abortion is something you can handle without mommy and daddy's help?"

"Just do it."


Danny whistled. "What kinda of insnae girl is this? Great, my rtype." He flipped to another page and seemed to know a girl there--Sam Manson. "Maybe Tucker wants revenge because he loved Leona? Or maybe because Leona's his cousin?" He asked himself then looked back at the page to see another thing he knew and saw before--the bat cave at the peak of horror mountain.

"Am I going to be fine?"

"Yes, you just need to rest."

I walked outside to see a gir with thick black hair. "Who are you?"

"Sam Manson. I heard what you did."

"You aren't going to tell my parents, right?"

"'Well, do me a favor--I just need to go to the bat caves from some extreme one-on-one bat hunting. "

"There's a cave for bats?"


Danny raised an eyebrow, 'of course." He looked at the second page, the one where he saw the bat caves at horror mountain. "Wait! Did Sam just said 'bat hujnting?' People have the weirdest hobbies these days."

"What's your name?"

"Leona Lisa Cuddy."

"You hang around with that boy a lot, don't you?"

"Yes, I do. I love Rob."

"He looks a bit too old."

"He's fourteen. He's not that old."

"You look young to be pregnant before."

"I am but I didn't know. My parents are jerks, okay?"

"Jeez, you need some anger management issues..."


Danny ran out of pages, 'but I don't get to know what happens there and what the hell does Leona have to do with Tucker?" He wondered, putting the last part into the bag.

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I hope you have a sequal...cause I want to read more for some reason @.@

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story isn't over yet. this might take another... four-six chapter... let's see. ;)

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whoo! good cause this storyline is interesting =D

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