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Post subject: Re: Getaway  Posted: 01 May 2009, 22:25 |
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Due to my schedule...and the fact I work the next two days, it'll probably be Monday. I'll try tomorrow if I write when I get off of work, but Monday is my best guess when I get 4 up. And Louanne is gonna be in this chapter.
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Post subject: Re: Getaway Posted: 02 May 2009, 03:51 |
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Cool. Can't wait!
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Post subject: Re: Getaway Posted: 02 May 2009, 23:36 |
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Chapter 4: The Bitter Rival
Danny was helping Cody unpack his clothes and settle in the guest room. It didn't take long, since Cody only brought one bag with him. A thunderstorm was happening in the night sky. (Sorry...it's raining here....thinking bout rain.) They were about to be finished before Danny's cell phone started ringing. He pulled the phone out of his pocket and answered it.
"Hello?" He asked.
"Hello Fenton." Louanne responded, in a cold voice. The voice sent chills up Danny’s spine, but he wasn’t scared of Louanne.
“What do you want?” Danny asked, almost angrily.
“Just wanted to see how my brother’s doing with you.” Louanne spat out.
“He’s fine.” Danny answered.
“He’s not when he’s around you Fen-Turd.” Louanne insulted him.
“Yes he is! He’s safer over here than he is with you and Richard you backwards insane person!” Danny exclaimed in anger.
Louanne grunted, “My father does what he does to protect him! He’ll be a softy like you if he doesn’t listen!”
“He’s hurting his only son!” Danny exclaimed and pointed out.
“You don’t understand! You’re not smart enough to understand!” Louanne exclaimed.
“Oh?! So you do?!” Danny threw back at her. Louanne sighed a bit. She didn’t have the slightest idea why, Richard was really secretive about anything he did.
“Bye Fen-loser!” Louanne then hung up. Danny was steaming angry, so Cody rushed to the kitchen and got some ice-cream and gave it to Danny.
“Eat it; hopefully it’ll calm you down.” Cody responded he knew what they were talking about. Danny started eating the ice-cream like it was the first thing he eaten in four years. It made the gang laugh a bit while watching Danny devouring the Vanilla Galeton. He finished eating the ice-cream in a few minutes and looked around the room.
“What?” Danny asked.
OOC- I know, short chapter.
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Im done I think that the times come
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I think this could be goodbye, I think youve run out of time
Time to, delete you
Burning up all your pictures
Tearing up all your letters
Ripping up all your sweaters
This is, this is
For the better
Slashing up all your tires
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Post subject: Re: Getaway Posted: 03 May 2009, 03:53 |
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Perfect! You made Louanne and Danny's fighting about this entire thing exactly as I would've. It's as perfect as ever! I love this chapter. And Richard secretive? Oh la la, why? I have to know!
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Post subject: Re: Getaway Posted: 03 May 2009, 08:35 |
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He's your character *SItcks tounge out.*
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I dont want you, I want you not there
Im done I think that the times come
To bring this thing to an end
I think this could be goodbye, I think youve run out of time
Time to, delete you
Burning up all your pictures
Tearing up all your letters
Ripping up all your sweaters
This is, this is
For the better
Slashing up all your tires
Smashing up all your flowers
Grabbing back all the power
Cause one mess is on me to
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Post subject: Re: Getaway Posted: 03 May 2009, 08:37 |
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Yeah. I guess. We both created him. lol. You made him sweet while I make him harsh.
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Post subject: Re: Getaway Posted: 03 May 2009, 08:51 |
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He's twisted! lol!
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Its not time to say how much you care, I dont think so
I dont want you, I want you not there
Im done I think that the times come
To bring this thing to an end
I think this could be goodbye, I think youve run out of time
Time to, delete you
Burning up all your pictures
Tearing up all your letters
Ripping up all your sweaters
This is, this is
For the better
Slashing up all your tires
Smashing up all your flowers
Grabbing back all the power
Cause one mess is on me to
Delete you
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Post subject: Re: Getaway Posted: 03 May 2009, 09:00 |
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That's why I like Richard.
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Post subject: Re: Getaway Posted: 03 May 2009, 13:05 |
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I'm working on Chapter 5. Probably have it up either Monday or Tuesday.
Blah...work....3-8 today....
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Its not time to say how much you care, I dont think so
I dont want you, I want you not there
Im done I think that the times come
To bring this thing to an end
I think this could be goodbye, I think youve run out of time
Time to, delete you
Burning up all your pictures
Tearing up all your letters
Ripping up all your sweaters
This is, this is
For the better
Slashing up all your tires
Smashing up all your flowers
Grabbing back all the power
Cause one mess is on me to
Delete you
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Post subject: Re: Getaway Posted: 05 May 2009, 11:45 |
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Really? Work? d*mn. That's boring.
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Post subject: Re: Getaway Posted: 05 May 2009, 19:14 |
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I forgot to work on it...gah! I'll have it up at least Saturday....if not...then next tuesday.
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Its not time to say how much you care, I dont think so
I dont want you, I want you not there
Im done I think that the times come
To bring this thing to an end
I think this could be goodbye, I think youve run out of time
Time to, delete you
Burning up all your pictures
Tearing up all your letters
Ripping up all your sweaters
This is, this is
For the better
Slashing up all your tires
Smashing up all your flowers
Grabbing back all the power
Cause one mess is on me to
Delete you
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Post subject: Re: Getaway Posted: 06 May 2009, 09:36 |
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It's Wednesday. lol.
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Post subject: Re: Getaway Posted: 06 May 2009, 13:03 |
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lol!
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Its not time to say how much you care, I dont think so
I dont want you, I want you not there
Im done I think that the times come
To bring this thing to an end
I think this could be goodbye, I think youve run out of time
Time to, delete you
Burning up all your pictures
Tearing up all your letters
Ripping up all your sweaters
This is, this is
For the better
Slashing up all your tires
Smashing up all your flowers
Grabbing back all the power
Cause one mess is on me to
Delete you
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Post subject: Re: Getaway Posted: 07 May 2009, 08:52 |
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*grabs onto Gb* And now, it's Thursday.
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